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Friday, December 5, 2014
Thesis-Afghanistan
There are numerous religious and historical causes to the Afghanistan war that in turn present multiple consequences regarding the social, economic, and political fabric of Afghanistan and the neighboring states.
I think this is a well stated thesis, but I might add a little more detail. Maybe try to answer your question briefly in the thesis rather than just restating it.
So, first I would tell you to state the exact religious and historical causes of this conflict so you can a clearly layered piece of writing for the reader's benefit. Also, I am not seeing any addressing of the news sources part of the paper. Overall, pretty good just address each part of your paper and ad much more detail.
Concise but too vague & broad. To which war in Afghanistan are you referring? What are the specific religious/historical causes that impact Afghanistan? How does the news/media coverage shape public perceptions and political policy? What actions should the international community take?
I think this is a well stated thesis, but I might add a little more detail. Maybe try to answer your question briefly in the thesis rather than just restating it.
ReplyDeleteSo, first I would tell you to state the exact religious and historical causes of this conflict so you can a clearly layered piece of writing for the reader's benefit. Also, I am not seeing any addressing of the news sources part of the paper. Overall, pretty good just address each part of your paper and ad much more detail.
ReplyDeleteConcise but too vague & broad. To which war in Afghanistan are you referring? What are the specific religious/historical causes that impact Afghanistan? How does the news/media coverage shape public perceptions and political policy? What actions should the international community take?
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