Friday, December 5, 2014
Thesis- Boko Haram in Nigeria
The actions of Boko Haram in Nigeria have widened the social gap between Christians and Muslims in Nigeria, as well as forced the government to take actions against an internal force; the media coverage encourages Boko Haram to continue their terrorism and the international community needs to put an end to these actions in Nigeria in order to prevent the expansion of Boko Haram outside of Nigeria.
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ReplyDeleteFirst, your thesis is clear and concise. There aren't any ambiguous terms or awkward phrases. Also, grammatically your thesis is well written.
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I would add something about political and economic factors into your thesis. I would also add in how different countries react to Boko Haram (from your news articles). Other than that, it's a really well written thesis!
I agree with Liz, your thesis is clear and concise. I think it would be a good idea to add reactions from the neighboring countries rather than international countries. I think that this would better show the consequences of Boko Haram. These are the countries that are being most affected by this group.
ReplyDeleteYou're on the right track but need to address the role of news/media coverage. Also, you may want to revise your wording for better flow.
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