Since 1894, the ownership of the Senkaku islands has been a matter of dispute, and as a result, Sino-Japanese relations have grown increasingly tense over the past three years; China and Japan need to resolve their differences and look to the future in order to prevent regional war breaking out.
Your thesis has the past, future, and present parts needed to answer the question, it is concise, and should be able to be answered in 8-10 pages. Consider adding a possible solution to the problem involving the Senkaku islands,but otherwise it seems perfectly fine.
ReplyDeleteYour thesis answers your question and you will be able to answer within the page amount. Your grammar seems to be good and your wording is clear. As Sean said, try to talk about how to solve the problem.
ReplyDeleteOverall, a well-written thesis. You'll just need to more explicitly address the news/media coverage for your final thesis.
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